SpiritualHeart
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 | Subject: Blue's Poems  Wed Feb 04, 2009 3:04 am | |
| Strolling outside,
On a dark scary night.
I hear weird voices,
speaking to me,
out of nowhere.
I follow the voices.
At last, I hear the voices,
loud and clear.
I fall into a deep hollow hole.
I climb out,
blood dripping from my nasty scars.
Then....
my legs were gone!
Where are my legs?!
Sorry that poem doesn't have a title. I know it's not very good.
Will write some more |
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Nicolas 47
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| | Subject: Re: Blue's Poems Wed Feb 04, 2009 8:51 am | |
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SpiritualHeart
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| | Subject: Re: Blue's Poems Fri Feb 06, 2009 2:38 am | |
| No. What? It's just a poem |
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Nicolas 47
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| | Subject: Re: Blue's Poems Fri Feb 06, 2009 8:58 am | |
| i know i just making a joke |
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Anne Bonney
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| | Subject: Re: Blue's Poems Tue Feb 17, 2009 8:36 pm | |
| Interesting poem, with quite a twist at the end!
I quite like how you decided against using a rhyme scheme, somehow I think it fits the scene that you're trying to portray, with the chaotic atmosphere.
Can I ask where you got your inspiration for this? =)
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