Poem/ Song called I Thought- made up by me

Subject: Poem/ Song called I Thought- made up by me Thu Apr 09, 2009 6:47 pm

What if someone left you and you said you'd be together forever?.....

I Thought

I thought we'd be together,
Forever.
Then you left me.
Your ignoring the pain,
You can clearly see, what you've done to me.
I Thought,
We'd be...
Together.....

I Thought,
We'd be together,
Forever.
But then you left me.
I Thought,
I Thought,
I Thought.
We'd be together.
I thought we'd be...
The perfect couple..
Please stay with me.

Oh why did you have to go,
You know I really love you so,
I Thought...
You loved me.
I Thought,
We'd be,
The perfect couple.
Please stay with me.

I Thought,
We'd be together,
Forever.
But then you left me,
All broken-hearted,
Its been 2 years since we parted.
All alone, I want you back.
I thought,
You loved me.

I Thought,
We'd be together,
Forever.
Can't you see?
I love you, why wont you love me?

I Thought.....
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Please rate guys and tell me what you think of it!

Subject: Re: Poem/ Song called I Thought- made up by me Sat Apr 11, 2009 3:45 am

Hmm I don't really know much about poems or songs so I don't think I can be any help on the matter.

I did like it tho, very sad....made me feel lonely lol

Subject: Re: Poem/ Song called I Thought- made up by me Sat Apr 11, 2009 3:48 am

I was watching tv when writing this so that probaly influenced me
Anywho thankyou anyways

it is good
but i like shorter poem

Maybe that as a song would be nice with a slow, sad tune.

Thanks and yeah